How to Write Hero Headlines to Skyrocket Click-Through Rates

Headlines are the lifeblood of your content. You can have have the best blog post in the world but if your headline doesn’t do it justice, you’ll be reeling from the lack of likes, shares and comments – not to mention readers.

According to Copyblogger:

About 80% of people will read your headline, but only 20% will read the rest of your content. Click To Tweet

The job of a headline is to get people to click through to your content, but here’s the problem – the Internet has a practically infinite amount of content and most people are suffering from a severe info-overload coma.

According to MarketingProfs and HostGator, the Internet is a crowded place:

  • On average, 139,344 websites are created every single day.
  • Over 2 million blog posts are published every day (and that’s just on WordPress!).
  • 60 hours of video are uploaded every minute on YouTube.

So how do you get people to care about your piece amidst an avalanche of great content? Simple. By crafting a captivating headline that pulls the reader into your post. A hero headline zaps people out of their info-overload comas and compels them to read your piece of content that you worked so hard to produce.

As a business owner or marketer who is blogging, your ultimate goal is to get more readers, convert them to more customers, and make more money. You might be using blogging to sell your products or promote products as an affiliate as a way to earn passive income.

Whatever the case, for any business that is content-driven, headlines are a crucial element of a successful content marketing strategy.

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The Type of Headlines that Work Best

Headlines are a well-researched part of content with many studies completed on the type of headlines that work best. The smallest tweaks can make the biggest of differences to your click-through rates.

Bracket, Colon or Hyphen

Outbrain and HubSpot studied over 3.3 million paid link, English-language headlines and found that headlines with bracketed clarifications such as “[New Report]” perform 38% better than those without. In addition, headlines with a colon or hyphen in them perform 9% better than ones without, presumably because this punctuation mark indicates a subtitle that includes more info.

Bengu headline example

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Learn More: How To Write Data-Driven Posts

How-To and List

According to OK Dork and CoSchedule, the type of content that consistently outperforms others (besides giveaways) are “how to” and list posts. The “how to” formula, by the way, can also be used in a “how not to” way, as in “How NOT to Pack When Going on Vacation” or even “Never Paint Your Room This Color.”

Interestingly, people like being addressed with the second-person tense (you/your). It adds a personal touch to your writing and makes the reader feel more directly involved with your content. Writing in this way works really well not only for headlines but for the body of your content, too.

How-to posts work particularly well for organic traffic as many people start their search terms with “how to” when looking for answers to their questions.

Humans are also obsessed with variety, and a list post caters to this inherent desire by providing an ordered list of concepts, ideas or things.

Most popular words in headlines

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Numbers

Numbers work really well because they stand out from the rest of the headline. They satisfy our organizational minds by showing us something in a logical and orderly fashion.

A Conductor study found that 36% of people prefer headlines that start with a number, a full 15% more than the next-most-popular type:

conductor study

Odd numbers generally do better than even numbers when it comes to headlines, although the most engaging number in a headline on Facebook is 10:

Buzzsumo research numbers

The Headline Linking Term that Works Like Magic

Buzzsumo recently completed a giant study where they analyzed over 100 million headlines in which they measured headline popularity based on the average number of engagements on the various social platforms. The study discovered many interesting trends on various social media platforms.

For headlines on Facebook, they found a phrase that receives double the amount of engagement, on average, compared to the second one: “will make you.” This came as a huge shock to the guys at Buzzsumo as this wasn’t a term that was even on their radar.

What makes this phrase really interesting is that it’s a linking phrase. It doesn’t appear at the start or the end of a headline. Instead, it makes a specific connection between the content and the likely impact on the reader and creates an emotional impact on the reader, which drives people to take action.

Speaking of emotional impact, headlines with emotional phrases consistently perform well on Facebook, such as:

  • Give you goosebumps
  • Is too cute
  • Melt your heart
  • Can’t stop laughing
  • Tears of joy
  • Shocked to see

The type of content that comes with these headline phrases are varied, including image, video and story-based posts.

Learn More: 10 Ways to Generate Topics and Write High-Ranking Blog Posts

Why Context Is Everything

There’s no one-size-fits-all when it comes to headlines. It depends on several variables like the digital channel (organic search, Facebook, Pinterest, etc.), target market, and whether you’re targeting B2B or B2C prospects.

For example, the headlines phrase with the most engagement on Twitter is “this is what”…

Buzzsumo research Twitter

And for LinkedIn, it’s completely different: “the future of”

Buzzsumo research LinkedIN

These variations in popular headline phrases speak to the demographic differences in each platform. Understanding your audience and industry is key to creating a headline that people can’t help but click.

Because people react in different ways depending on the platform, you may know exactly how to craft a headline that attracts shares on Pinterest, but the same may not work so well on Facebook.

It’s also important to note that everything from headline phrases to optimum word count differ for B2B and B2C companies.

This brings me to my next point…

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The Optimum Length for a Headline

Is there really a magic length for a headline that help drive more engagement? Does it really make much of a difference?

As it happens, yes there is, and yes it does.

Some experts argue that the best headlines are the ones that are short, sweet and to the point, while others have testified that longer headlines, as many as 18 words, drive the most engagement.

Buzzsumo decided to put all these assumptions to the test with their study on 100 million headlines. In the articles they analyzed, they checked for the number of words in the headlines and cross-referenced them to the average number of Facebook engagements.

Here’s what they found:

Buzzsumo average words headline

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The graph shows that headlines between 12 and 18 words produce the highest level of engagement, on average. This may sound like a lot, but a phrase this long really helps you get your point across.

Some examples include:

Examples of Amazing Headlines

There’s no better way to learn how to craft hero headlines than to see what has worked really well already. Stealing is a great formula for successnot in an unethical way that encourages plagiarism, but in a way that involves absorbing the key concepts and adding your own unique twist!

Here are some examples to inspire you.

1) “Watch a Student Totally Nail Something About Women That I’ve Been Trying to Articulate for 37 Years

Upworth headline example

This post is one the most highly shared pieces of content on Upworthy, receiving almost 830,000 shares in total, according to the link analysis tool, Ahrefs.

Watch a Student

The headline uses the “X years” ending format which is the second most-popular Facebook headline ending by average user engagement. It also starts with a verb and invokes curiosity with an intriguing point.

2) “This Infographic Tells You How Best to Use Herbs in Your Cooking

This Infographic Tells you How to Best Use Herbs in Your Cooking

This infographic caters to all the food lovers out there, and received over 66,000 social shares:

This IG Tells You

It’s no surprise that the vast majority of shares came from Pinterest, as this is where infographics thrive, especially in the food niche.

The word “this” is the most popular first word for headlines that get the highest number of shares on Facebook, on average. It’s interesting to see this work really well on Pinterest, too.

TopFirstWordFacebook

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3) “This is the Easiest Way to Escape a Sinking Vehicle. Knowing HOW Might Save Your Life One Day

Themindunleashed headline example

The title of this article is so compelling. It speaks to the fear of being trapped in an enclosed space and drowning and, more importantly, offers a solution to the problem.

This is another headline that starts with “this” and happens to be 18 words long, an optimum number according to the data I shared above. It also makes interesting use of the “how to” formula, by highlighting “HOW” in the middle of the sentence.

4) “7 Steps to Beautiful DIY Apparel Product Photography
Shopify headline example

This is a classic list post on Shopify that was shared 4,400 times across Facebook, LinkedIn and Pinterest:

7 Steps to Beautiful

List posts work really well and this headline in particular is very specific. It shows you the seven steps you can take to have beautiful images for your e-commerce clothing store.

Specific headlines always outdo vague headlines because people want to know exactly what problem your post is going to solve. If you’re too vague, you’ll be lucky to get a two-second glance.

So how do you construct a winning headline like the ones above?

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5 Formulas for Writing Hero Headlines

Crafting a headline that gets eyeballs on your content is a fine mix of science and art. The science is the result of research that reveals the type of headlines that work. The art is taking the science and creating your own unique versions that captivate people and compel them to click through to your page.

1) Numbers Are Your Friend

Let’s kick off with a tried-and-true formula that is proven work. Starting your headline with a number will help your content pop. Odd numbers like 5, 15 and 7 work well. Even numbers 10 and 20 also work well.

Example:

  • Original – Online Business Ideas that You Can Start Today
  • Better7 Online Business Ideas that You Can Start Today

Which one would you rather click?

2) Adjectives Are Attractive

Adjectives are words that modify nouns. Words like effortless, incredible and essential emphasize your point, add emotional weight, and increase the power of your headline.

Example:

  • Original – How to Overcome Failure and Succeed at Anything
  • Better – How to Overcome Soul-Crushing Failure and Succeed at Absolutely Anything

3) Words that Drive Action

Certain words in the English language make us want to spring into action more than others and are known as power words. Words like conquer, fearless and staggering have a powerful impact.

You can use these words to help inspire people to click through to your masterpiece!

Example:

  • Original – 7 Steps to Help You Overcome Anxiety
  • Better – 7 Steps to Help You Conquer Your Anxiety and Become Fearless

4) Use the WHW Formula

What, Why and How. These are known as trigger words because they initiate a process or course of action the action of clicking on your post in this case. “How” and “Why” are typically used in step-by-step articles that are designed to inform or persuade. You’ll usually start your articles off with one of these trigger words.

Example:

  • Original – This CEO Went from Bankrupt to Billionaire in 6 Months
  • BetterHow This CEO Went from Bankrupt to Billionaire in 6 Months

5) Promise Your Readers Something Worthwhile

Are you writing to inform? Entertain? Persuade? Perhaps all three! Whatever it is you’re writing, you’ll want to include a promise in your article headline.

What will your reader learn when they finish your article? How long will it take them to learn this? You want to be bold, without over-promising. Dare your prospect to read and take action on what you’ve promised.

Example:

  • Original – 9 Ways you Can Learn Conversion Optimization
  • Better – 9 Ways you Can Learn Conversion Optimization in 5 minutes

A Formula that Brings It all Together

Here’s what we have when we combine all the elements of a winning headline:

Trigger Word or Number + Adjective/Power Word + Keyword + Promise

Without this formula, you’ll end up with headlines like this:

  • 15 Ways to Get Six-Pack Abs
  • How to Make Lasagne

Applying this formula creates headlines like this:

  • 15 Incredibly Easy Ways to Get Jaw-Dropping Six-Pack Abs
  • How to Make Delicious Lasagne in 2 Minutes
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Why You Should Always Start with the Headline

Your headline is your map, a literary road that takes your reader on a journey from problem to solution. Your sub-headings are signposts along the way to achieving the goal outlined in your headline.

Creating a piece of content without a headline often results in a vague or poorly formed idea that wanders all over the place. How are your readers going to know what you’re going on about when you can’t put a label on it yourself?

Starting with a headline helps you focus your idea and structure your post. Click To Tweet

And you should spend a good amount of time coming up with a headline that not only works for SEO, but is irresistible to humans!

Learn More: How to Write Content for People and Optimize It for Google

Rounding Things Off

Headlines that provoke curiosity, provide explanations and/or have emotional hooks tend to engage users best. Clarity of message, promises made and a focus on why the reader should care are all qualities that the best headlines have in abundance.

The value of the research shown in this article should result in an improved understanding of the fundamental principles that make a headline great.

It also highlights the importance of context in terms of target audience, industry and traffic channel as they all differ from each other.

Your headline is one of the most important parts of your content. It sells your blog post in just a few words. It’s your job to ensure that those words make people want to click through to your article.

Now go forth and create some hero headlines!

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